Eve of Surrender
By freddysfive
first story from a long time reader. there’s a back story on why I wrote this one. I write a lot, and write a wide range of styles and on a lot of genres. But this is my first erotic piece. Hope I can become better with time and experience.
This one was a quick and dirty story (pun intended) and I wrote it for someone. hope you guys enjoy
“Hmmm…” a small moan escaped her lips as woke up from sleep. She fought to open her eyes, tried in vain to get up, and in a few seconds she found herself lying in bed again. She began to smile, remembering the dream she just woke up from.
In her dream she was in a dark room, she had her eyes open but could not make out anything but shadows, and she could not move. She was on a bed, and she wasn’t alone. There was a man there with her. She could hear his voice, feel his body next to hers, but she couldn’t see him. She was shaking, unsure of what to do. Part of her wanted to fight back, and run away from the bed. But part of her was caught in a helpless mix of desire, curiosity, and lust.
The man was slowly tracing around her neck with soft and slow kisses. Sometimes he would make small bites and nips on her neck. His hands were now on her breasts gently caressing them. “Ahhhh..” she would then moan in reply to his actions, her body starting to warm up from the kisses. She could feel his hands on her thighs, slowly inching their way to her pussy. She was wet, and her juices were starting to drench her panties.
She bit down on her lips, anxious, unsure and a bit frightened. “Please, please stop…” she said in a soft voice. But the man heard through what she was saying, he heard the desire in her voice and knew that her protest meant nothing at all. “Shhh…” he whispered into her ear. “I’ll take care of you, I’ll make sure that you won’t stop cumming after this.” His mouth made its way to her ears, gently nibbling and tugging on her earlobes, licking her there. And as her mouth started to open into another sigh of desire, she suddenly felt his fingers making their way to her pussy. Her body started to lose control, and she let out all her desires and started to moan.
And that was when she woke up.
Her name was Eve, and she was a twenty-something working in a large firm in Quezon City. She was a smart one, and finished her engineering major in one of the top universities in the country. She was pretty too, but rather reserved and shy. She would mostly be quiet to anyone else except her close friends. And even with them, you could tell that she was keeping something back. Like a secret she was saving for herself, or maybe for the right person.
She’d been having these dreams again lately, and the feelings persisted even as she was getting up from her bed. She made her way to the shower, and started her morning routine before going to work.
As the water hit her body, she thought back to her dream. She remembered her feeling of helplessness. “No… not really helpless,” she thought to herself. “It was surrender.” She still felt warm even though the water was cascading down her body. She still felt the kisses on her neck, the tug and bite on her ears. Her hands moved up to her breasts as she felt the ache in her nipples. The water and her desire helping to make the rose-pink colored tips of her breasts swell and harden to points. She pinched both nipples and softly let out a sigh of pleasure. “Hmmmm…” she said, as one of her hands made its way down to her pussy. She had the faintest traces of hair, much like you would see in a young girl. It didn’t need any trimming, and was such a nice sight to behold. She thought of how her pussy yearned to be filled with a cock, and then she slid a finger in. Her other hand was continuing to pinch and pull on her nipples, now hard and distended. And she slid two fingers in her pussy, furiously making her way to a climax. She came hard inside the shower. Now breathless, she let the water cool her off. She dried herself, put on her uniform and made her way to work.
Work was pretty much uneventful, as her projects she had to manage were still on the drawing board. She busied herself by checking her facebook and twitter accounts, and surfing online. When it was time for lunch, her friends called her over so they could go and have a lunch-out.
Her friends were a mix of guys and girls. Once, they were just random people, but chance brought them closer to each other. As they packed themselves into one of the guy’s cars, she found herself sitting next to Nick, one of the newer guys to join the group. They hadn’t really gotten close yet, but the friendship was nice enough. This time though, she couldn’t help but fell something odd about Nick while they were side by side. Since they were cramped in the backseat, it couldn’t be helped that Nick’s hands would be close to Eve’s body. And at times she could feel like his hand was grazing her legs, as if trying to caress them in secret. As they drove on, sudden stops would cause Nick’s hand to press on Eve’s calves, and at times her thigh. All these actions were done and gone in a second. Eve tried to look at Nick’s face to get some clue as to what was going on. But Nick’s face were turned away, his eyes gazing out the window. Eve made a mental shrug and decided that it was nothing, and she got it off her mind as they went out of the car and made their way to the restaurant.
Several hours later, Eve found herself working late in the office. At the last moment, her boss had an urgent plan which needed to be inspected thoroughly. “So much for any Friday night plans,” she thought. It was already going into the middle of the night when she finished. She was about to go out of the building and look for a cab near the main road when it began to rain hard. She worried for a moment that she wouldn’t be able to get home when she heard someone call out her name. “Eve! Hey, you’re still here.” It was Nick, and it looked like he had worked late too.
“Yeah.” Eve said, “and it looks like I’ll be stuck here for quite awhile, until the rains let up.” Nick smiled and said. “Want to catch a ride home? I’m about to go in awhile.” Eve smiled, and agreed to the plan.
They were on the road when Eve’s mom called her. Eve answered the phone, and frowned after the conversation. “What’s wrong?” asked Nick. “My mom said it’s already flooding outside our house.” Eve said, “The house is okay, but it looks like I can’t make my way home coz of the floods.”
Eve was starting to worry again when Nick said, “Hey you want to stay at my place for a bit? I can take you home early in the morning when the roads are all clear.”
The offer was very tempting, thought Eve. But she also remembered how Nick acted strange that morning. Then she heard the rain come down harder, and thought “It was just probably my imagination, I’m sure it didn’t mean anything.” She smiled at Nick and said, “are you sure? I won’t turn you down since it’s really raining hard.”
With that Nick said “Okay, no problem . Let’s just go to Mc Donald’s and get a quick some take-out, then we’ll go home.”
They finished their meal inside the car, and got home after half an hour on the road. They went inside and Eve was surprised at how quiet it was inside. “Are you the only one staying here?” she asked. “My family is on vacation in the province, they’ll be back next week.” Nick then pointed to a room and said “You can stay in my room, I’ll lay out a mattress to sleep on tonight.” He added, “I’ll get you some clothes to sleep in from my sister so you’ll be more comfortable.”
Eve didn’t know what came over here when she said “Can I just borrow a big shirt from you? I’m more comfy that way.” She was picturing herself wearing the shirt, without anything under, and it made her slightly blush.
She didn’t think that Nick noticed anything out of the ordinary with the request, and they made their way to his room. He took out a large, white shirt from his closet and handed it to her. He then took out a towel and said, “Here, maybe you’d like to take a shower before you go to sleep? The bathroom is just over here and you can sleep after you’re done. I’ll set an alarm, but just wake me up too so I can take you home after, okay?”
Eve nodded and she took a bath. The water served to cool her off a bit. She couldn’t help feel a little anxious and restless, but she didn’t know why. She thought of how it was like right now, just the two of alone, and if Nick wanted to do something she wouldn’t be able to stop him. But instead of the though scaring her, she felt the ache once more in her nipples and her pussy. She started to bring her hands down to quell her thirst for pleasure but she stopped as she couldn’t bring herself to do it here. She sighed and thought “It’s just me I guess, I just need some rest.”
She put her panties back on and wore the shirt. She decided against going totally commando under the shirt, as it would be too bold. The shirt came to just above her knees. She went out and spied Nick on the couch, he was busy fiddling with his phone. She called to him “Nick, I’m going to sleep na okay? Thanks again for letting me stay here.”
Nick went to her and asked “Everything okay?” Once more he showed here the room and said “Here are all the light switches, and here’s a new blanket din. Just call me if you need anything.” He smiled, and on impulse Eve kissed his cheek and said “Thanks.”
Nick left the room then and went back to the couch. Eve closed the door behind her and crept up the bed. Her bare legs felt good as they moved against each other. She sighed and started to sleep.
She woke up suddenly after hearing the crash of thunder and hard rain beating down outside. She was a bit afraid of loud noises and couldn’t bring herself to close her eyes and sleep. She went outside and looked for Nick. She saw him asleep on the mattress on the living room floor. She lay beside him and said “Nick..” Nick stirred and asked what was wrong. “Can I stay here? I’m just a bit scared of the noise from the storm.” “Sure” said Nick. Nick then got up and got a pillow from his room, along with a blanket. He laid these out and Eve rested her head on the pillow. She closed her eyes and fell asleep.
She had the dream again, this time the man was kissing her hard. She could feel his breath on her skin, and his hands circling her breasts. This time there was more urgency in the man as she felt his hands pinching and pulling her nipples. “Hmmmm.. “ Eve moaned… “Please… Nooo… Uhmmm” She found herself saying. He was kissing her now, and she was returning the favor. Their tongues playing with one another as they kissed, she felt herself making small bites on the lips of her lover. “Ahhh.. Uhmmmm..” was all she could say.
Eve opened her eyes then, and saw that it wasn’t just a dream. Nick was there on top of here, he was kissing her hard. And now he was on her neck, tracing small kisses around it. “Nick…” Eve cried out in a small voice, she didn’t know what to do. She knew she should stop him but her body was burning with desire too. His kisses had made her shiver, and she felt her body begin to rise as he kissed her way around her neck. “Nick… Please stop…” she said again.
Nick looked into her eyes then, and started to kiss her lips. She struggled for a bit, but found herself returning his kisses. She started to protest, and brought her hands up to his chest to push him off. But Nick held her arms firmly and pinned them down on her sides. Eve’s eyes now were wide, and they showed fear. But they also showed something else, a hidden desire to be taken like this. Perhaps sensing this, Nick continued to press firmly down on her hands, and started to kiss her again. This time he started with slow, and soft kisses. And Eve found herself returning his kiss. She started soft and slow, and then was biting down on Nick’s lower lip. She found herself answering back whenever Nick’s tongue played with hers. The kiss started to become faster and frenzied, with Nick pressing down on her even more.
Nick broke the kiss and once more looked at her. She continued to plead “Please.. no…” but they were only whispers, and Eve knew then, she was his. Nick lifted both her arms up and lay them on top of her, using just one hand to pin them down. He was silent as his free hand lifted her shirt. He let out a small gasp when he saw her breasts. Her nipples pointing up, aching to be sucked. He looked at her once more as if to say with his eyes that she could not stop him, and he lowered his mouth to her breast. He started kissing around her nipples, circling the softness of her mounds. His tongue snaked its way out, tracing circles and licking all around and slowly catching her nipple. Eve closed here eyes and moaned. Nick then started to suck on her nipple, feeling it grow hard in his mouth.
Eve’s body started to move around as if restless. She was fighting to keep control, but her mind went back to her dream. “Surrender” she thought. “Hmmm.. Ahhh… “ she said as Nick sucked and bit on a nipple. “Please…. Nick Please…” Nick looked at her, with a nipple still being circled by his tongue. “Please Nick…” His eyes asked the question. “Please suck it harder!” answered Eve in a loud voice. Nick let go of her arms and started to fondle her other breast. He kept on sucking her nipple while pinching the other one in his fingers. She saw how he loved this play on her breasts as he alternated each one in his mouth. He would squeeze the breasts together and bring the nipples closer to one another so he could lick them faster. Her nipples were so hard now, and pointed. Each ache from the nipples was quelled by Nick’s tongue and mouth. Her breast were now wet with Nick’s kisses.
Eve’s mind was going blank from the pleasure she was experiencing from Nick’s loving of her breasts. She felt every lick on her nipple, every bite and tug, every suckle from his mouth. She felt her pussy now getting wet and so warm.
Eve was bucking her hips now, and pressing her breasts more into Nick’s mouth. “ahhh… Fuck… hmm… so good…” She cried out. Nick stopped for a while and took of his shirt. He was looking at Eve now. She wasn’t protesting anymore, her eyes were now filled with lust. Nick placed his hands on Eve’s waist and slowly pulled down her panties. Eve made a feeble attempt to lock her legs, but Nick was firm in his grip. He spread her legs to get the panties off, and in an instant she was naked in front of him.
Nick placed his hands on her knees to spread her legs apart. His head moved towards her pussy and he started to eat her out. Eve could feel his tongue licking her, making circles in and out the lips of her cunt. She could feel him licking everywhere, even tickling the rosebud of her ass. She couldn’t stop moaning “Fuck.. ahhh… Fuck…” She was so wet now, her juices running down Nick’s chin and lips.
And she felt it rising up in her, making its way from her core to her wet pussy. “I’m cumming!” she screamed out loud. Nick kept licking while she came, Eve’s body shaking while her cunt was still grinding its way into Nick’s mouth.
As she lay there, catching her breath. She saw Nick’s hardness through his shorts. Still silent, Nick stood up and took off his shorts. Eve could see his cock, upright and hard, straining against its own stiffness. He moved up and knelt beside her, and he simply said “Suck it” Eve sighed and closed her eyes and her mouth went to Nick’s cock. She started sucking it, using her tongue to lick the underside of his shaft while sucking him. She bobbed her head up and down, letting him fuck her mouth with his cock. She released it and licked the head, circling it with her tongue. She licked up and down, and even licked his balls.
“Ahhh.. that’s it.” Nick said, “you suck my cock really well.” He placed his hands behind her head and started to pump. She could feel his hardness move in and out her mouth, and she felt Nick’s hands fingering her pussy. She moaned while his cock was in her mouth, adding to the pleasure Nick was already feeling.
She let him out of her mouth, and gripped his cock in her hands, and looked at Nick. Her eyes were heavy lidded, her face filled with lust. “Fuck me” she said. “Fuck me hard!” Nick moved to her now, and he used his hands to spread her legs wider. He grabbed his cock in his hand and placed the head on the lips of her pussy. He rubbed the head slowly, in circles, teasing her with excruciating pleasure. “Please fuck meeee noww…” Eve said. And with that, Nick entered her.
The feeling of his cock inside her made her see stars immediately. She led out a moan, low and loud. “Ahhhhhh…” Nick was so hard and full in her, and she could feel her pussy walls clamp down on his cock. Nick started to pump in slowly to get a feel of her pussy. He let his cock go out almost fully before plowing it back in her again. Eve was moaning now, screaming obscenities.
Nick then went out of her pussy, and Eve’s hands went to Nick’s waist. “Please” she said, “please fuck me.” Nick was still quiet but his hands went to Eve’s waist to run her over. Eve then understood what to do, he wanted to fuck her from behind. Eve turned around and placed her ass up high. And Nick started to fuck her from behind.
“Fuck.. ahhh.. I’m being fucked dog style” Eve thought to herself. She could feel his hands around her waist, gripping tight as he pushed in and out of her. The sound of his cock and balls hitting her ass and pussy was driving her wild. Eve felt something else then, she felt a tickling sensation building up in the rosebud of her anus. “Fuck.. Ah.. his finger is going up my ass” she thought. And she felt it then, like two pistons ramming in and out both her holes. She could feel his finger and his cock through the thin membrane between her pussy and ass.
“Fuck! Harder! Ah.. Fuck me.. Fuck me more!” Was all Eve Could say. Nick obliged and continued to ravage her, pumping his hard cock in and out her wet pussy. Her pussy grew tighter but more wet with every stroke he made. She could feel herself cumming. “Nick… ohhhhhh.. ahhhh…” she cried out, “I’m gonna cum! Make me cum with your cock!” she exclaimed. Nick moved faster and faster until she said “Fuck, here it is.. I’m cumming.. ahhhhh… cumming!” And Eve came in torrents, wave after wave of pleasure released from her pussy.
But Nick wasn’t done yet, he continued to fuck her after she felt the last waves of her orgasm. “Ahhhhhh! Fuckkk” she said, and soon she was cumming again. She thought it would go on forever as Nick continued to pound her wet cunt, making her come over and over again. Then she felt Nick go out of her and heard him say “I wanna cum in your mouth” Eve hurried up and took his cock in her mouth. Her pussy juice was mixed in with the taste of cock as she closed her mouth tight and started to lick and suck. Her hands went to his balls to play with them as she fucked him with her mouth. Nick held the back of her head with his hand, urging her to go deeper and suck harder. She did, and gave Nick an expert blowjob. He felt her tongue going up and down his shaft, and encircling the head while she was sucking him.
Eve then felt Nick’s balls tighten and she knew he was about to cum. Eve looked at Nick and said “Please.. I want to taste your come” and she sucked him off again. That did it for Nick, he let out a loud moan and said “Fuck, I’m cumming! Take my cum. Take it all!” He came hard and plenty. Eve tried to take it all in her mouth but some of it dribbled down her lips and chin. She swallowed what she could, and relished the flavor of cum in her mouth. She licked his shaft clean, getting all the cum she could and swallowing it.
They lay together then, both catching their breath. Silent and without words. After some minutes passed, Nick looked at her and said “You’re mine tonight. I’m gonna make you cum and cum” Eve closed her eyes and sighed, and she gripped Nick’s cock in her hand, and slowly moved down to suck it and make it hard again.
“Surrendering was the best thing I could have done” She thought as she took his cock in her mouth. She felt her pussy get wet in anticipation, and she knew it was just the beginning.
- Eve of Surrender - September 26, 2024